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I do like to best action is clean the home.
Usually I can't control dirty space.
If when I arrive at home, I want to clean everywhere.
and I wish everything in line and when I looking, more comfortable.
Sometimes That could be seriously thinking. Don't worry about that now.

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Good day Ethan!

I feel the same way as you do. I want every corner of my house spic and span. Moreover, I love shiny pots and fragrant bathroom. So, this is hard work but then, I clean my house so well every Sunday. I understand however that you and your wife are both working and may not have the luxury of time to do it often.

Anyway, happy cleaning your home when you can. Thank you for religiously answering your homework!

See you in class.

-T. Donna =)

I do like to best action is clean the home.
>>I do like as the best action as cleaning the home.

Usually I can't control dirty space.
>> Correct!
OR: Usually, I can't control dirty spaces.

If when I arrive at home, I want to clean everywhere.
>> If/ When I arrive at home, I want to it to be clean everywhere.

and I wish everything in line and when I looking, more comfortable.
>>  I wish everything in order and when I'm looking around, it is comfortable.

Sometimes That could be seriously thinking. Don't worry about that now.
>> Sometimes that could be seriously what I'm thinking. Don't worry about that now.
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