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\"Death is not a period, but a comma, in the story of life\". How would you explain this sentence?

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I think that death is end of life. When I die, I can't think continuously. Philosopher Descartes said, "I think, therefore I am". It means, I exist until I can think. I have no religion. So, I always curious about the world of after my life. I can't see, tell, feel and think. I want to see that how my children live without me, but I can't. I am going to tell about how to live on. And I want to see their independent life before I am death. That's why I am trying to live diligently.

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Hi, Hwanny!
Thank you for diligently sharing your opinion about our essay question on death.
Nobody truly knows what lies ahead after death. That's why many people are scared of it. They are scared of the unknown.
Religion does give you a perspective about the after life and what could possibly happen to you after you die.
But only the dead knows and like what you have mentioned, the dead can't speak.
I was born a Christian and I was raised to believe that there's eternal life for people who follow the good ways.
But I'm not entirely sure of that either.
Anyhow, let's continue living righteously and do our best to enjoy the only life we are given.
I hope you're doing great.
See you in class later.
~Teacher Charry

I think that death is end of life.
>> I think that death is the end of life.
When I die, I can't think continuously.
>> CORRECT!
Philosopher Descartes said, "I think, therefore I am".
>> CORRECT!
It means, I exist until I can think.
>> CORRECT!
I have no religion.
>> CORRECT!
So, I always curious about the world of after my life.
>> So, I have always been curious about the after life.
I can't see, tell, feel and think.
>> I can't see, speak, feel and think.
I want to see that how my children live without me, but I can't.
>> I want to know how my children would live without me, but I can't.
I am going to tell about how to live on.
>> I am going to tell them how to live on.
And I want to see their independent life before I am death.
>> I also want to see them live independently before I die.
That's why I am trying to live diligently.
>> CORRECT!
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