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What’s the best way to pass job interviews?

작성자: 선*
2021-11-24 552

회원님의 영작문

First, we put ourselves into the company owners’ shoes and then decide what is the priority to be picked among applicants. For example, appearance, job-related skills, language ability, and etc.
Second, we need to study about the company, such as the company’s foundation spirit, history, overall knowledge of the company.
Third, search the predecessors’ experience who went through the interviews as applicants or call the personnel department of the company directly to ask what you want to know before the interviews.
Fourth, think about how to show your passion, enthusiasm, and capacity while interviewing, and how much you work at the company.
Fifth, choose the outfit, hairstyle, and make-up for interviews so that the interviewers can remember you after the interview.
Last but not least, be punctual, or go to the interviews at least half an hour early to adjust yourself to the atmosphere of the interview.
Above all, be confident. To face the interviews, you need to have a gut.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Sun Jung! Thank you for doing your homework.  However, you have to be careful with word usage and sentence construction. Please take note of the corrections. 


- Debbie
 
First, we put ourselves into the company owners’ shoes and then decide what is the priority to be picked among applicants. For example, appearance, job-related skills, language ability, and etc.
>> First, put yourself into the company owners’ shoes and then decide what the qualifications are, for example, appearance, job-related skills, language ability, etc.

Second, we need to study about the company, such as the company’s foundation spirit, history, overall knowledge of the company.
>> Second, study about the company such as its history and other important information.

Third, search the predecessors’ experience who went through the interviews as applicants or call the personnel department of the company directly to ask what you want to know before the interviews.
>> Third, interview former applicants or call directly the personnel department of the company to ask what you want to know before the interview.

Fourth, think about how to show your passion, enthusiasm, and capacity while interviewing, and how much you work at the company.
>> Fourth, think about how you can show your passion, enthusiasm, and ability during the interview and tell how hard you're going to work at the company.

Fifth, choose the outfit, hairstyle, and make-up for interviews so that the interviewers can remember you after the interview.
>> Fifth, choose an outfit, a hairstyle, and make-up that will make the interviewers remember you after the interview. 

Last but not least, be punctual, or go to the interviews at least half an hour early to adjust yourself to the atmosphere of the interview.
>> Sixth, be punctual, or go to the interview at least half an hour early to get used to the office's atmosphere.

Above all, be confident. 
>> This is a good sentence.

To face the interviews, you need to have a gut.
>>  You need to have the guts to face the interview.
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