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Why should/shouldn\'t we have hobbies?

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I would say that we must have hobbies. It's because hobbies are the driving force of life. If you have no anything of hobbies, your life will be bored. But, you don't have to need a special hobby in my personal opinion. Just, When you do something, you're feeling comfortable things as hobbies.

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I agree with you, Hyeon! If we find something interesting then we can consider it our hobby. It doesn't have to be extra-special. I hope you found yours!-Faith-
I would say that we must have hobbies. 
>> CORRECT
OR Everybody should have hobbies.
It's because hobbies are the driving force of life. 
>> It's because hobbies are the driving force in life. 
If you have no anything of hobbies, your life will be bored. 
>> If you have don't have any hobbies, your life will be boring. 
But, you don't have to need a special hobby in my personal opinion. 
>> But, you don't need a special hobby in my personal opinion. 
Just, When you do something, you're feeling comfortable things as hobbies.
>> Just think that when you do something and you are feeling comfortable with it, then you can consider it your hobby.
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