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Which is harder, to accept something or reject it? Share your thoughts in a few sentences.

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Both are difficult to me, but accepting something is harder than rejection Sometimes, acceptance is required swallowing my pride and admitting that I was wrong, but it¡¯s not easy to a person of a high self-respect like me.

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Hi Judy!

Acceptance takes time. If we are rejected or when we reject something, we would need an explanation and reason why there was rejection. Accepting that things can or cannot be need a lot of motivation as well as hard work to overcome or to succeed. I totally agree with you. Although at times, being rejected is painful as well. For me, rejection is direction and acceptance is moving on.

Thank you for your very good ideas on these two things.

See you again in class soon!

-T. Donna =)

Both are difficult to me, but accepting something is harder than rejection 
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Or: Both are difficult to me but accepting something is harder than rejection. (Place a period at the end of the sentence.) 

Sometimes, acceptance is required swallowing my pride and admitting that I was wrong, but it¡¯s not easy to a person of a high self-respect like me.
>>  Sometimes, acceptance is required by swallowing my pride and admitting that I was wrong, but it¡¯s not easy to a person of a high self-respect like me.
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