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What do you think is the reason why the number of COVID-19 cases is increasing in South Korea?

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I think there are two reasons about the number of COVID-19 cases is increasing in South Korea.
First, a lot of people are vaccinated so they think that it is fine to go out and hang out with a lot of people.
But it can cause some damages so I think we still have to be careful even we got vaccinated.
Second, the goverment said that since now, we are going to have all face to face classes.
So a lot of students are going to school in a day, and that's why the number of COVID-19 is increasing nowadays.
So I think those things are the reasons about the number of COVID-19 cases is increasing in South Korea nowadays.

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Hi John:)

I noticed that too. :( Even my students nowadays are not feeling well. All of them are worried that they might have COVID-19. 

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I think there are two reasons about the number of COVID-19 cases is increasing in South Korea.
>> I think there are two reasons why the COVID-19 cases in South Korea are increasing. 

First, a lot of people are vaccinated so they think that it is fine to go out and hang out with a lot of people.
>> CORRECT

But it can cause some damages so I think we still have to be careful even we got vaccinated.
>> What they don't know is that we can still get infected with it so we have to be careful even if we are already vaccinated. 

Second, the goverment said that since now, we are going to have all face to face classes.
>> Second, the government said face-to-face classes would be on-going already. 

So a lot of students are going to school in a day, and that's why the number of COVID-19 is increasing nowadays.
>> So a lot of students are going to school in a day. That's why the number of COVID-19 is increasing nowadays.

So I think those things are the reasons about the number of COVID-19 cases is increasing in South Korea nowadays.
>> So I think those things are the reasons why the number of COVID-19 cases is increasing in South Korea nowadays.

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