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Parents almost guide me

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Usually, my parents guide me. Like study or my incorrect behavior, they discipline me about it. My parents said, "We will guide and discipline you before you become adult". It means that my parents guide me almost. Or, there are teacher, friends, and neighbor. But, they can't guide me more than my parents.

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Hello, Daniel! Your reply is the perfect answer to the given question. The overall content of your work is comprehensible. 


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Usually, my parents guide me.
>> This is a good sentence.

Like study or my incorrect behavior, they discipline me about it. 
>> They guide me through my studies and discipline me to correct my behavior.

My parents said, "We will guide and discipline you before you become adult".
>> My parents said, "We will guide and discipline you before you become an adult."

It means that my parents guide me almost.
>> It means that my parents guide me most of the time.

Or, there are teacher, friends, and neighbor. But, they can't guide me more than my parents.
>>  I also have teachers, friends, and neighbors, but they can't guide me the way my parents do.

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