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food recommendation for foreigners.

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There are many dishes I want to recommend to foreigners visiting Korea, but among them, I want to recommend Korean BBQ.
It's not a very special dish for Koreans, but I really want to introduce it to foreigners. In fact, I recommended it to foreigners on a business trip to Korea and had a meal together, and the response was very good.
It may look like a simple dish , but there are many ingredients that go well with pork belly.
You can enjoy korean BBQ with kimchi, bean sprouts, cheese, and vegetables.
And there are various sauces, so it makes the taste richer.
It also goes well with soju, which cannot be missed.
There are also many types such as frozen korean BBQ, aged korean BBQ, and seasoned korean BBQ.

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Hi Evan:)

That really is one of the best dishes in South Korea. It's my personal favorite too, Samgyupsal. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

There are many dishes I want to recommend to foreigners visiting Korea, but among them, I want to recommend Korean BBQ.
>> There are many dishes I want to recommend to foreigners visiting Korea, but among them, I want to recommend Korean BBQ the most.

It's not a very special dish for Koreans, but I really want to introduce it to foreigners. 
>> CORRECT

In fact, I recommended it to foreigners on a business trip to Korea and had a meal together, and the response was very good.
>>> In fact, I recommended it to foreigners who are on a business trip to Korea. I usually recommend it to people I eat with and all of their responses are good. 

It may look like a simple dish , but there are many ingredients that go well with pork belly.
>> CORRECT

You can enjoy korean BBQ with kimchi, bean sprouts, cheese, and vegetables.
>> You can enjoy Korean BBQ with kimchi, bean sprouts, cheese, and vegetables.

And there are various sauces, so it makes the taste richer.
>> CORRECT

It also goes well with soju, which cannot be missed.
>> CORRECT

There are also many types such as frozen korean BBQ, aged korean BBQ, and seasoned korean BBQ.
>> There are also many types of meat such as frozen Korean BBQ, aged Korean BBQ, and seasoned Korean BBQ.

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