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What do you think very old people think of modern technology?

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When I see my grandparents, they were difficult to use gadgets.
Modern people have no choice but use smartphone.
Especially, in Korea, the 2G phone service stopped, so all people have to use smartphone.
Many of old people originally are difficult to use cellphone, so smartphone is more difficult.
I think the reason is that new technology is unfamiliar and It is changing faster.
Old people need the time to adapt to change, or they may not want to change.

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Hi Kang!
Nice one in answering this question.  Remember the correct usage of your articles such as 'a, an, and the'.  See you in class. :)

-T. Maine

When I see my grandparents, they were difficult to use gadgets.
>>When I saw my grandparents, they had a difficult time using their gadgets. 
Modern people have no choice but use smartphone.
>>Modern people have no choice but to use smartphones these days because of some reasons. 
Especially, in Korea, the 2G phone service stopped, so all people have to use smartphone.
>>Especially in Korea, 2G phone service stopped, so all people must use smartphones. 
Many of old people originally are difficult to use cellphone, so smartphone is more difficult.
>>Many senior citizens originally had difficulty using their cellphones as well as their smartphones. 
I think the reason is that new technology is unfamiliar and It is changing faster.
>>I think the reason is the quick change of technology.
Old people need the time to adapt to change, or they may not want to change.
>>Correct.
>>OR: Older people need time to adapt to change, or they may not accept the change. 

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