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My favorite Movie is nothing.
but I like action or SF genre of Movie, like Iron man or martial arts movie
In the old days I have been there often movie theater.
but It's been a long time after COVID-19.

Quickly I hope to finish COVID-19

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Hi there Ethan!

There are a wide variety of movies to choose from depending on your favorite or mood. Science fiction or dystopic movies are very fascinating since they present futuristic thoughts of how we and the world would become in the future. Of course, a little action every now and then can be very thrilling!

So, thanks a bunch for doing your homework. It is very highly appreciated.

See you soon in class!

-T. Donna =)

My favorite Movie is nothing.
>> My favorite movie is nothing.
Or: I do not have any favorite movie.

but I like action or SF genre of Movie, like Iron man or martial arts movie
>> But, I like action or SF genre of movies, like Iron Man or martial arts.

In the old days I have been there often movie theater.
>>In the old days, I have been often in movie theaters.

but It's been a long time after COVID-19.
>> Correct!
Or: But it's been a long time since COVID-19.

Quickly I hope to finish COVID-19
>> Quickly, I hope COVID-19 to be finished.
Or: I hope COVID-19 to be finished quickly.
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