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Alcohol

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1. How does alcohol change your behavior, personality and face?
When I drink, I tend to laugh more and emotional depth gets deeper. So I can feel happier, or more sad deeply. And I get extroverted feeling less afraid, shy. Sometimes through this chance to express emotions and feelings, I could get rid of stress and disburden myself.

2. What part does alcohol play in the culture of your country?
Becuase of The effects that mentioned above, many people like to drink when they need to get to know each other, or need ice breaking. And when we have to talk about serious stories or something in deep inside our heart, people use drinking too. But pressing a drink on others sucks. I had to throw up many times due to this. -_-

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Good evening, Yu Jeong! 

Thank you for answering the questions. :) Please take note of the comments/ suggestions below. 

Question 1. How does alcohol change your behavior, personality and face?

Your Answer: When I drink, I tend to laugh more and emotional depth gets deeper. So I can feel happier, or more sad deeply. And I get extroverted feeling less afraid, shy. Sometimes through this chance to express emotions and feelings, I could get rid of stress and disburden myself.

>> When I drink, I tend to laugh more and feel deeper emotions. As a result, I tend to feel happier, or sadder and I feel less afraid or shy. Sometimes, I get the chance to express my emotions and feelings and I get rid of my stress and I unburden myself.

Question 2. What part does alcohol play in the culture of your country?

Your Answer: Becuase of The effects that mentioned above, many people like to drink when they need to get to know each other, or need ice breaking. And when we have to talk about serious stories or something in deep inside our heart, people use drinking too. But pressing a drink on others sucks. I had to throw up many times due to this. -_-

>> Because of the effects that I mentioned above, many people like to drink when they need to get to know each other, or need to break the ice. People also drink when we have to talk about serious stories or something in deep from our hearts. But pressing a drink on others sucks. I had to throw up many times due to this. -_-

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I enjoyed reading your answers! I can relate to you! ^^

Drinking can be recreational and useful as long as we do it in moderation. :) 

See you later! 

Cheers! 
~Miya^^
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