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Traffic laws have been made to prevent accident which is included speed limit, wearing safety belt and not to use smart phone while people are driving. I believe that these laws absolutely reduce traffic accident but most people don't follow regulation if there aren't speed cameras or police inspection. I guess that the fundamental problem is a number of cars in each country. It is true that people feel upset, if the car in front of me drives slow although, there isn't traffic jam on the road. In addition, Koreans tend to do everything quickly, we are always in a hurry. It leads people to drive fast if there isn't no surveillance. Our government has changed speed limit on the road from 60km to 50km due to increasing a number of accident but I don't think that it is the best way to reduce traffic accident because people don't follow regulation even if, it is school zone. Furthermore, it is easy to find speed camera with GPS due to technology development. Simply, we can ignore traffic

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Traffic laws have been made to prevent accident which included speed limit, wearing safety belt and not to use smart phone while people are driving. 
>>> Traffic laws have been made to prevent accident which includes speed limit, wearing safety belt and not using smartphone for drivers. 
I believe that these laws absolutely reduce traffic accident but most people don't follow regulation if there aren't speed cameras or police inspection.
>>> I believe that these laws absolutely reduce traffic accident but most people don't follow the regulations if there aren't speed cameras or police inspection.
 I guess that the fundamental problem is a number of cars in each country. 
>>>  I guess that the fundamental problem is the number of cars in every country. 
It is true that people feel upset, if the car in front of me drives slow although, there isn't traffic jam on the road. 
>>> CORRECT
In addition, Koreans tend to do everything quickly, we are always in a hurry.
>>> CORRECT
 It leads people to drive fast if there isn't no surveillance. 
>>> CORRECT
Our government has changed speed limit on the road from 60km to 50km due to increasing a number of accident but I don't think that it is the best way to reduce traffic accident because people don't follow regulation even if, it is school zone. 
>>> Our government has reduced its speed limit on the road from 60km to 50km due to increasing number of accidents but I don't think that it is the best way to reduce traffic accidents because people don't follow the regulations even if, it is school zone. 
Furthermore, it is easy to find speed camera with GPS due to technology development. Simply, we can ignore traffic
>>> Furthermore, it is easy to find a speed camera with GPS due to technology development. 
>>> CORRECT
Simply, we can ignore traffic.
>>> CORRECT
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