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What are the positive things about watching TV?

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I guess there are more negative aspects about watching TV but are also the positive things.
In terms of positive things about watching TV, we can get information and news that we didn't know and hear.
Actually, there are good and valuable programs on TV. For example, documentary, education programs and others.
I usually watch the EBS English program in the morning to improve my English studying.
For me, This is a fairly big positive thing.

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Hi Eun Ha!
Thank you for the efforts today.
I know how hard you're trying.
That is very much appreciated.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I guess there are more negative aspects about watching TV but are also the positive things.
>> I guess there are more negative aspects about watching TV but there are also positive things.
In terms of positive things about watching TV, we can get information and news that we didn't know and hear.
>> In terms of positive things about watching TV, we can get information and news that we didn't know and heard about.
Actually, there are good and valuable programs on TV. 
>> Correct
For example, documentary, education programs and others.
>> For example, there are documentaries, education programs and others.
I usually watch the EBS English program in the morning to improve my English studying.
>> I usually watch the EBS English program in the morning to improve in my English studies.
For me, This is a fairly big positive thing.
>> For me, this is a fairly big positive thing.
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