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What I will buy gift in christmas to my family

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I will buy a Chanel bag for my family.
That is because Chanel bag is a super luxury bag.
My second reason is Chanel bag is very beautiful.
My third reason is Chanel bag is made of special texture.
But, the Chanel bag is too expensive. That is because a Chanel bag is very big and beautiful.

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Hi, Joey! Thank you for answering your homework. I am surprised that you know something about Chanel. I  hope someday you could give your parents Chanel bags.  

- Teacher Debbie

I will buy a Chanel bag for my family.
>> I would buy a Chanel bag for my family.

That is because Chanel bag is a super luxury bag.
>> That is because it is a luxury bag.

My second reason is Chanel bag is very beautiful.
>> My second reason is it is very beautiful.

My third reason is Chanel bag is made of special texture.
>> My third reason is it has a special texture.

But, the Chanel bag is too expensive. 
>> However, it is too expensive.

That is because a Chanel bag is very big and beautiful.
>> That is because it is very big and beautiful.
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