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What was the lamest excuse you have heard of?

--> It is the lamest that they do not remember what they said in the past and make excuses in other words.
For example, if she forgets to say that she had a party for her son's birthday and makes excuses to take a vacation because the child's birthday is approaching, it seems the lamest.

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Hi there Bo Im!

It is indeed very lame to make others suffer for our own benefit. Simply put, at times, some just want to be selfish or hurt other's feelings. 

Thus, thank you so much for these two very carefully constructed sentences! The second one is very long and needs careful attention to read, but it has appropriate transitions and vocabulary. Excellent job

Thank you very much for this answer. See you later in class!

-T.  Donna =)

It is the lamest that they do not remember what they said in the past and make excuses in other words.
>> Correct!

For example, if she forgets to say that she had a party for her son's birthday and makes excuses to take a vacation because the child's birthday is approaching, it seems the lamest.
>> Correct!
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