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I'd taught English for long until almost 5 years ago. Not as a school teacher but as an instructor. As you know, Korean English teacher usually teach grammar and reading comprehension. But teaching grammar and reading is one thing and speaking is another.
In addition, even though I have quite grammar knowledge, when I speak English, I am too busy to manage to express what I want to say. Haha. I don't have any special reason but I really want to improve my English skills now. I think all of sudden I've been possessed by a spirit of study. Other than that, I don't know how to explain this passion. Important thing is that the passion is making me enjoy my daily life more than ever before.

*Beth! Nice to meet you as a teacher!

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Thank you for this Jessie!

I'd taught English for long until almost 5 years ago. 
>>> OR:  I have taught English for almost 5 years in the past.
Not as a school teacher but as an instructor. 
>>> correct 
As you know, Korean English teacher usually teach grammar and reading comprehension. 
>>> correct 
But teaching grammar and reading is one thing and speaking is another.
>>> correct 
In addition, even though I have quite grammar knowledge, when I speak English, I am too busy to manage to express what I want to say. Haha. 
>>> correct 
I don't have any special reason but I really want to improve my English skills now. 
>>> correct 
I think all of sudden I've been possessed by a spirit of study. 
>>> correct  
Other than that, I don't know how to explain this passion. 
>>> correct
Important thing is that the passion is making me enjoy my daily life more than ever before.
>>>  OR: The most important thing is that the passion makes me enjoy my daily life more than ever before.
*Beth! Nice to meet you as a teacher!
>>> correct 
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