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Theme : [ESSAY] What's your thought on the new COVID variant called Omicron? [In 3~5 Sentences]
I think it is so scary.
I thought the Delta virus is so scary but today, I knew that there's new virus called Omicron.
I searched the news and I knew a Japanese diplomat came in to Korea, Inchon airport.
I think the Omicron virus is so scary! : (

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      Theme : [ESSAY] What's your thought on the new COVID variant called Omicron? [In 3~5 Sentences]


I think it is so scary.
>> or: Personally, I think it's alarming.

I thought the Delta virus is so scary but today, I knew that there's new virus called Omicron.
>> I thought the Delta variant was already so scary but today, I knew that there's a new COVID-19 variant called Omicron.

I searched the news and I knew a Japanese diplomat came in to Korea, Inchon airport.
>> I searched the news and read that a Japanese diplomat had a layover at Incheon airport in Korea before flying to Japan. 

I think the Omicron virus is so scary! : (
>> I certainly think the Omicron variant is so scary! : (

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