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The best present for my parents

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The gift I want to give my parents is actually home. But I think it's too big, and the gift I want to give them now is the premium massage chair.
They must had a hard time raising me and my sister as a child, but I hope i can relieve their burdens with a massage chair.
Massage chairs can be purchased by anyone, but it is not easy to use in apartments because they still damage the downstairs floor due to vibration.
Fortunately, my parents live is a small two-story house, so I think there will be no problem using it and they will like it very much.
In fact, I think my parents will like any gift I give them.
I want to live with my parents because they won't live forever, but I'm always sad because of various situations.

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Hi Evan:) 

I think you are a very thoughtful son. That's a terrific gift especially for people their age. Try to spend time with them more if you have the chance and make a lot of memories with them. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

-Teacher Elise

The gift I want to give my parents is actually home. 
>> CORRECT

But I think it's too big, and the gift I want to give them now is the premium massage chair.
>> But I think it's too big for now so I will buy them a premium massage chair instead. 

They must had a hard time raising me and my sister as a child, but I hope i can relieve their burdens with a massage chair.
>> They must have had a hard time raising me and my sister but I hope that I can relieve their burdens by buying them a massage chair. 

Massage chairs can be purchased by anyone, but it is not easy to use in apartments because they still damage the downstairs floor due to vibration.
>>Massage chairs can be purchased by anyone, but it is not easy to use in apartments because they will cause damage to the floors down stairs due to the vibration. 

Fortunately, my parents live is a small two-story house, so I think there will be no problem using it and they will like it very much.
>> CORRECT

In fact, I think my parents will like any gift I give them.
>> CORRECT

I want to live with my parents because they won't live forever, but I'm always sad because of various situations.
>> CORRECT
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