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1. Which topics do you avoid when you talk with someone for the first time?
- Political or religious topic is a little burdensome to talk to someone I first met. This is because if I talk about issues sensitive to each other from the beginning, I may miss the opportunity to get close. And I believe that getting to know someone is a process that takes time, so at first, I think it is necessary to start a conversation with a comfortable topic where we can talk without any burden.

I want to define what friednts are...
'people who understand and encourage each other with something in common.


2. Which topics are safe?
- As mentioned above, it would be nice to start a conversation with a topic that is not burdensome to each other. For example, talking about the weather, each other's home country and the coronavirus crisis these days. These kinds of small talks can help build a friendship.

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Hello, Steve! Thank you for doing your homework. Your reply is the perfect answer to the given question. You were able to make lengthy sentences. Awesome! However, be careful with articles and prepositions please.

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1. Which topics do you avoid when you talk with someone for the first time?
- Political or religious topic is a little burdensome to talk to someone I first met. 
>> Politics or religion is a little burdensome to talk about with someone I just met.

This is because if I talk about issues sensitive to each other from the beginning,  I may miss the opportunity to get close.
>> If I talk about sensitive issues at the first meeting, I may miss the opportunity to get close to that person.

 And I believe that getting to know someone is a process that takes time, so at first, I think it is necessary to start a conversation with a comfortable topic where we can talk without any burden.
>> Moreover, I believe that getting to know someone is a process that takes time, so at first, I think it is necessary to start a conversation with a comfortable topic which we can talk about without any burden.

I want to define what friednts are...'people who understand and encourage each other with something in common.
>> I want to define what friends are. These are people who have something in common with you and understand and encourage you.


2. Which topics are safe?
As mentioned above, it would be nice to start a conversation with a topic that is not burdensome to each other.
>> This is a good sentence.

For example, talking about the weather, each other's home country and the coronavirus crisis these days. 
>> For example, we can talk about the weather, each other's home countries, and the coronavirus crisis these days. 

These kinds of small talks can help build a friendship.
>> These kinds of small talk can help build friendship.
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