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I searched the term 'grid'. It refers to 'an electric grid', or an electric power system network. 'Off the grid' was also new for me (^^) but now I got to know it thanks to you.
I had a short read about the author, Gretchen Bakke by googleizing. Surprisingly, she is a cultural anthtopologist and has been researching and writing about the transition of electric grid of USA for long. Great!

In fact, I was naturally reminded of the film, , reading your writing the day before yesterday.  The film was a story that Nicola Tesla's alternating current(AC) won over Tomas Edison' s direct current (DC). So almost every household is powered by AC now.
Not until I watched the film did I know the fact that the electric car company, Tesla was named after Nicola Tesla in this historical drama film. What an  ignorant person I was!

I think somtimes I'm a happy cherry picker from your cherry trees of new knowledge.^^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you so much for this Jessie! Keep them coming.

I searched the term 'grid'. 
>>> correct 
It refers to 'an electric grid', or an electric power system network. 
>>> correct 
'Off the grid' was also new for me (^^) but now I got to know it thanks to you.
>>>  correct
I had a short read about the author, Gretchen Bakke by googleizing. 
>>>  OR: I had a short read about the author, Gretchen Bakke by googling.  
Surprisingly, she is a cultural anthpologist and has been researching and writing about the transition of electric grid of USA for long. Great!
>>> Surprisingly, she is a cultural ANTHROPOLOGIST and has been researching and writing about the transition of electric grid of USA for long. Great! 
In fact, I was naturally reminded of the film, <the current war>, reading your writing the day before yesterday.
>>> correct  
The film was a story that Nicola Tesla's alternating current(AC) won over Tomas Edison' s direct current (DC). 
>>> OR: The film was a story of Nicola Tesla's alternating current(AC) winning over Tomas Edison' s direct current (DC).
So almost every household is powered by AC now.
>>> correct  
Not until I watched the film did I know the fact that the electric car company, Tesla was named after Nicola Tesla in this historical drama film. 
>>> correct 
What an ignorant person I was!
>>>  correct 
I think somtimes I'm a happy cherry picker from your cherry trees of new knowledge.^^
>>> I think SOMETIMES I'm a happy cherry picker from your cherry trees of new knowledge.^^

(P.S. I capitalized the words that were spelled wrong in the sentences. )
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