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What is one thing money cannot buy?

--> I think what money cannot buy is health.
Samsung Chairman Lee Kun-hee and Apple's Steve Jobs are also incredibly rich, but it was difficult to keep their health.
It's good to work hard to make money, but it's much more important to be healthy.

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 Hello Bo Im!

Health is absolutely wealth! For what is all our money's worth when we can no longer live to spend it.

At times, we have to refuse more work and activities to protect our health. Thus, I totally agree-health cannot be bought. It can make our lives  longer when we can medicate but discipline and healthy living are mental sets we need to possess to live longer.

Thank you for your answer! See you tonight!

-T. Donna =)

I think what money cannot buy is health.
>> Correct!

Samsung Chairman Lee Kun-hee and Apple's Steve Jobs are also incredibly rich, but it was difficult to keep their health.
>> Correct!
Or:  Samsung Chairman Lee Kun-hee and Apple's Steve Jobs were also incredibly rich, but it was difficult for them to keep their clean bill of health.

It's good to work hard to make money, but it's much more important to be healthy.
>> Correct!
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