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Why do people want to explore the space?

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Because meteorite will Earth and people will die.
They want to go to the other planet that don't have meteorite and have gravity.
So they wouldn't die.
People think there is money.
Maybe there will be silver in the moon.
I want to build city in the space.

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Hello Lyla!
Good job in doing your homework today.  Keep on practicing English! :)

-T. Maine

Because meteorite will Earth and people will die.
>>It is because meteorites will go to Earth and people might die. 
They want to go to the other planet that don't have meteorite and have gravity.
>>They want to go to other planets that don't have meteorites and have gravity. 
So they wouldn't die.
>>Correct. 
>>OR: So people wouldn't die. 
People think there is money.
>>Correct. 
Maybe there will be silver in the moon.
>>Maybe there will be silver on the moon. 
I want to build city 
he space.
>>I want to build a city in space. 

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