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the pros and cons about eating a home

작성자: 김*경
2021-12-03 347

회원님의 영작문

There are many benefits of cooking and eating at home.
First, you can enjoy healthy food made of fresh ingredients.
Second, you can save the cost of eating out.
Third, if the children have grown up enough to help you cook, the whole family can have a pleasant cooking experience together.
Fourth, families can be protected from infectious diseases during these days when contagious diseases are prevalent.

Of course, there are disadvantages of eating at home.
First, if the wife has to cook food alone, she certainly feels more burdensome than eating out.
Second, if you eat out, you will have a good time with your family, such as talking to catch up, but if you eat at home, you will not be able to spend a cozy time with your family while cooking, setting table, and washing dishes.
Third, if the wife is still not good at cooking, you will not be able to expect a satisfactory meal.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Steve!  Thank you for your essay. You were able to use good expressions in your homework. It is remarkable. Keep it up!

- Debbie


There are many benefits of cooking and eating at home.
>> This is a good sentence.

First, you can enjoy healthy food made of fresh ingredients.
>> This is a good sentence.

Second, you can save the cost of eating out.
>> Second, you can save on the cost of eating out.

Third, if the children have grown up enough to help you cook, the whole family can have a pleasant cooking experience together.
>> This is a good sentence.

Fourth, families can be protected from infectious diseases during these days when contagious diseases are prevalent.
>> This is a good sentence.

Of course, there are disadvantages of eating at home.
>> Of course, there are disadvantages of eating at home, too.

First, if the wife has to cook food alone, she certainly feels more burdensome than eating out.
>> First, if the wife has to cook food alone, it feels more burdensome than eating out.

Second, if you eat out, you will have a good time with your family, such as talking to catch up, but if you eat at home, you will not be able to spend a cozy time with your family while cooking, setting table, and washing dishes.
>> Second, if you eat out, you will have a good time with your family because you can catch up on things,  but if you eat at home, you will not be able to spend a cozy time with your family while cooking, setting the table, and washing dishes.

Third, if the wife is still not good at cooking, you will not be able to expect a satisfactory meal.
>> Third, if the wife is still not good at cooking, you will not be able to expect a satisfactory meal.
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