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How do you feel when you are being compared with someone?

--> If I were compared with someone, I would feel very bad. When I first started working at the company, my boss compared me with my predecessor. Perhaps, my boss liked her more. At that time, I had a hard time because of it.

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Hi Bo Im!

Comparison when you are the less person in the process can be painful. If you are the standard of comparison, it can be flattering. I guess it is human nature to compare as we do this in many different ways when we have to choose something or for matters of preference. Well, thank you for this excellent answer!

As you can see, all of your sentences are perfect. Congratulations! 

See you in class in less than an hour. :)

-T. Donna =)

If I were compared with someone, I would feel very bad. 
>> Correct!

When I first started working at the company, my boss compared me with my predecessor. 
>> Correct!

Perhaps, my boss liked her more. At that time, I had a hard time because of it.
>> Correct!
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