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담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Are these sentences grammatically correct?

작성자: 강*아
2021-12-03 402

회원님의 영작문

If We Work Together Like Termites, the Construction of Skyscrapers Can be Done Very Easily!
Passive Cooling Techniques and Air Moving Equipment: Not Needed for Incredible Natural Structures
Termite mounds, Incredible Natural Structures in Zimbabwe and Australia, Were 10% Cheaper to Build!
Does Mike Pearce, an African Architect, Have a Temperature Right After Cool Air Came in Through the Bottom?
Mike Pearce developing the same passive cooling systems has constructed various eco-friendly buildings throughout the world.
his constructing these buildings has contributed to the development of passive cooling techniques.
Amazingly, you can make your own passive cooling systems in your house by yourself.
We can move on to standard method after learning from sea urchins’ mistakes.
By analyzing nature in various aspects, we get the secret of what nature has achieved.
In addition to missions in space, the design of a sea urchin mouth could also be used in other diverse fields.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Miss MinA!

Happy Friday! Thank you for asking for my help. I do hope I was able to help you with the items you sent. Do enjoy tomorrow and take care!


1. If We Work Together Like Termites, the Construction of Skyscrapers Can be Done Very Easily!
>> CORRECT

2. Passive Cooling Techniques and Air Moving Equipment: Not Needed for Incredible Natural Structures.
>> CORRECT

3. Termite mounds, Incredible Natural Structures in Zimbabwe and Australia, Were 10% Cheaper to Build!
>> CORRECT

4. Does Mike Pearce, an African Architect, Have a Temperature Right After Cool Air Came in Through the Bottom?
>> CORRECT (syntactically correct but semantically wrong)

5. Mike Pearce developing the same passive cooling systems has constructed various eco-friendly buildings throughout the world.
>> Mike Pearce, developing the same passive cooling systems, has constructed various eco-friendly buildings throughout the world.

6. his constructing these buildings has contributed to the development of passive cooling techniques.
>> His constructing these buildings has contributed to the development of passive cooling techniques.

7. Amazingly, you can make your own passive cooling systems in your house by yourself.
>> CORRECT

8. We can move on to standard method after learning from sea urchins’ mistakes.
>> We can move on to the standard method after learning from sea urchins’ mistakes.

9. By analyzing nature in various aspects, we get the secret of what nature has achieved.
>> CORRECT

10. In addition to missions in space, the design of a sea urchin mouth could also be used in other diverse fields.
>> CORRECT
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