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Reply to Ben

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That's right. Such wording must be a safe tactic when we should say something about quantum.^^ "No one understands quantum mechanics." That's what the great physicist, Richard Feynman said.  The true meaning of that is quantume theory is beyond human being's common sense/knowledge by our experiences through our incomplete sensory organs.  That is to say, regardless of human's understanding, it's true.
I was once into reading books about quantum. Nonetheless, I don't still think I understand the quantum thoery even a little bit. I just could say that I've been used to the principles that how the microworld works a little little little...... bit more than before.
While reading quantum theory-related books, I have encountered the term 'interaction' more than you think. Maybe there seems to be a point that connects with Buddhist philosophy as many people say such.
Don't get me wrong. I'm not saying that this is a key word of quanrum theory. But the very familiar term 'interaction' could

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
That's right.
>>> CORRECT
 Such wording must be a safe tactic when we should say something about quantum.^^
>>>  Such words must be a safe tactic when we should say something about quantum.^^
 "No one understands quantum mechanics."
>>> CORRECT
 That's what the great physicist, Richard Feynman said.  
>>> That's what the great physicist, Richard Feynman said.
The true meaning of that is quantum theory is beyond human being's common sense/knowledge by our experiences through our incomplete sensory organs.
>>> CORRECT
That is to say, regardless of human's understanding, it's true.
>>> CORRECT
I was once into reading books about quantum. 
>>> CORRECT
Nonetheless, I don't still think I understand the quantum thoery even a little bit.
>>> Nonetheless, I don't think I still understand the quantum theory even a  bit.
I just could say that I've been used to the principles that how the microworld works a little little little...... bit more than before.
>>> I just could say that I've been used to the principles that how the microworld works little by little more than before.
While reading quantum theory-related books, I have encountered the term 'interaction' more than you think.
>>> CORRECT
 Maybe there seems to be a point that connects with Buddhist philosophy as many people say such.
>>> CORRECT
Don't get me wrong. 
>>> CORRECT
I'm not saying that this is a key word of quantum theory.
>>> CORRECT
 But the very familiar term 'interaction' could...
>>> CORRECT
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