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Mussorgsky performed his famous piano works at a memorial exhibition of Hartmann¡¯s works.
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2. With the development, many universities have adopted biomimetics education for their students.
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3. The interactions between artists in different fields caused a lot of unexpected competition.
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4. Mussorgsky tried to express his feelings about Hartmann¡¯s paintings in Pictures at an Exhibition.
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5. Mussorgsky performed his famous piano works at a memorial exhibition of Hartmann¡¯s works.
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6. If you¡¯re not an expert, it is hard to link the melodies with each of Hartmann¡¯s paintings.
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7. Modest Mussorgsky used to work in collaboration with his best friend, Viktor Hartmann.
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8. For example, some engineers are planning to apply this design to moving garbage trucks.
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9. The great success of mixed martial arts fighting depends on the interaction between these different types of martial arts.
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