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Why do adults collect children\'s stuff like hello kitty or some cartoon characters?

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People miss their childhood as they become adult. Nowadays, thers are so many people who collect kid¡¯ items.
Becouse they miss their childhood memory.
People of Modern society feel lonely and have many worry.
They enjoy collecting kid¡¯s items to comfort in themselves just like a kind of a little luxury game.
I think people always feel lonely and anxiety.
We want to fill this space.
Our mind is like a big pot that have a small hole. Maybe the people who collecting these items also have this hole.

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Hello Eun Yeong! I agree with you, people try to compensate what they missed in their childhood. sometime we call them late bloomers because they are enjoying the present which should had happened in their past. Thanks for sharing.
Aki~
People miss their childhood as they become adult. Nowadays, thers are so many people who collect kid¡¯ items.
>>> People miss their childhood as they become adult. Nowadays, there are so many people who collect kid¡¯s items.
Becouse they miss their childhood memory.
>>> Because they missed childhood experiences.
>>> Because they missed those when they were young.
People of Modern society feel lonely and have many worry. 
>>> People of modern society feel lonely and have many anxieties.
They enjoy collecting kid¡¯s items to comfort in themselves just like a kind of a little luxury game.
>>> They enjoy collecting kid's items to comfort themselves just like a kind of a little luxury game.
I think people always feel lonely and anxiety.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I think people are always full of anxieties that make them lonely.
We want to fill this space.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> We want to top up this space.
Our mind is like a big pot that have a small hole. Maybe the people who collecting these items also have this hole.
>>>  Our mind is like a big pot that has a small hole. Maybe the people who collect these items also have this hole.
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