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Most people are accustomed to noise we hear every day such as traffic, pet barking and people talking on the phone. There are numerous causes of noise pollution. The primary type of noise are man-made noise and environmental noise. Man-made noise refers to the noise created due to human activities. It can be anything from construction work, noise from the air, vehicular traffic, household noise, noise from pubs and bars. Second one refers to the kind of noise occurring from a range of environmental activities. This can be anything from the mating call of animals to the sound of thunderstorms. These noise lead to serious health problem like hearing disability, psychological issues and sleeping disorder. Many of us don't care of environmental noise because we consider it as uncontrolled sound, but sound from the upstairs, household chores and social events can be minimized by establishing regulation, for example, impose fine if personnel or factories don't follow regulations.

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Most people are accustomed to noise we hear every day such as traffic, pet barking and people talking on the phone.
>>> Most people are accustomed to the noise we hear every day such as traffic, pet barking and people talking on the phone.
 There are numerous causes of noise pollution. 
>>> CORRECT
The primary type of noise are man-made noise and environmental noise. 
>>> CORRECT
Man-made noise refers to the noise created due to human activities.
>>> CORRECT
 It can be something from construction work, noise from the air, vehicular traffic, household noise, noise from pubs and bars.
>>> CORRECT
 The second one refers to the kind of noise occurring from a range of environmental activities.
>>> CORRECT
 This can be something from the mating call of animals to the sound of thunderstorms.
>>> CORRECT
 These noise lead to serious health problem like hearing disability, psychological issues and sleeping disorder.
>>> CORRECT
 Many of us don't care of environmental noise because we consider it as uncontrolled sound, but sound from the upstairs, household chores and social events can be minimized by establishing regulations, for example, impose fine if personnel or factories don't follow regulations.
>>> CORRECT
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