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The purpose of studying history

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History teaches us to know our identity.
That is because we live in history coexisting with history.
We can know and recognize our ancestors and nations through history.
In the end, the purpose of studying history can be seen in the following words.
Someone said: "I study history to be happy and humble."
I agree with him because history leads us the right way when we are lost.

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Hi Eun Ha!
You did a good job here.
I love the transitions that you used.
Everything was smooth and clear.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
History teaches us to know our identity.
>> History helps us to know our identity.
That is because we live in history coexisting with history.
>> Correct
We can know and recognize our ancestors and nations through history.
>> Correct
In the end, the purpose of studying history can be seen in the following words.
>> Correct
Someone said: "I study history to be happy and humble."
>> Correct
I agree with him because history leads us the right way when we are lost.
>> I agree with him because history leads us to the right way when we are lost.
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