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What are the situations where you would be open to lend money to someone?

Once one of my friends needed to lend new house. but she couldn't afford a house with good condition. so she had to find a house which is on basement or very old house. If I would lend money to her, then she could get a better house. I suggested that, But she refused and said that she felf very grateful but she couldn't borrow money from me.
If I can help, I am open to lend money for my close friends. because I know how much they care about me and they don't want to damage me. and I still live with my parents, I don't live financially tight for now. so other than this situation, when they need my help, I am willing to do that.
for examples, housing, tuition fee, hospital bill.

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Good evening! 

Thank you for answering the homework questions! Please take a look at the comments/ suggestions below: 

Question: What are the situations where you would be open to lend money to someone?

Your Answer: Once one of my friends needed to lend new house. but she couldn't afford a house with good condition. so she had to find a house which is on basement or very old house. If I would lend money to her, then she could get a better house. I suggested that, But she refused and said that she felf very grateful but she couldn't borrow money from me. If I can help, I am open to lend money for my close friends. because I know how much they care about me and they don't want to damage me. and I still live with my parents, I don't live financially tight for now. so other than this situation, when they need my help, I am willing to do that.
for examples, housing, tuition fee, hospital bill.

>> Once upon a time, one of my friends needed to transfer to a new house. She couldn't afford a house in good condition, so she had to find a basement or a very old house. I offered to lend her money so she could rent a better house, but she refused. She said that she felt grateful for my offer but she couldn't borrow money from me. If I can help, I am open to lend money to my close friends, because I know how much they care about me and I know that they won't try to get out of paying me back. I still live with my parents, so I am not financially constrained right now, that's why if my friends will need my help, I am willing to lend them money for if they need it for rent, tuition fee or hospital bills. 

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Loved your ideas and how you explained it. :) 

Have a great night ahead and see you again tomorrow~

Cheers! 

~Miya^^
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