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What do you do if you forget an appointment?

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If I forget an appointment, first I say that I'm really sorry again.
And I participate as soon as possible.
Then, to release their anger, I buy the meal or coffee for them.
However, I never miss appointments.
If I forget, the reason is that I didn't write the appointment on diary book.
I love to make schedules in diary, so I buy it every years.
When I write schedules in diary, It help to remember it and to prevent to convert each appointments.
In addition to, I can decorate in diary.
When I see the cute diary, I'm motivated make schedule, and I can live my life designedly.
I recommend to this way.

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Hello Kang!
Your answer today is long.  Take note of the correct sentences and memorize or learn the patterns so you will be able to follow them when you are making your own sentences as well.  :)

-T. Maine 

If I forget an appointment, first I say that I'm really sorry again.
>>Correct. 
And I participate as soon as possible.
>>Correct. 
Then, to release their anger, I buy the meal or coffee for them.
>>Then to make them feel relieved, I treat their meals or buy them coffee. 
However, I never miss appointments.
>>Correct. 
If I forget, the reason is that I didn't write the appointment on diary book.
>>If I forget something, my reason might be because I didn't write it in my diary.
I love to make schedules in diary, so I buy it every years.
>>I love making schedules in my diary, so I buy a diary every year. 
When I write schedules in diary, It help to remember it and to prevent to convert each appointments.
>>When I write schedules in my diary, it helps me remember my appointments and avoid missing them. 
In addition to, I can decorate in diary.
>>In addition to this, I can decorate my diary. 
When I see the cute diary, I'm motivated make schedule, and I can live my life designedly.
>>When I see my cute diary, I'm motivated to make a schedule and I can live my life well. 
I recommend to this way.
>>I recommend you this way. 

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