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I¡¯m living in the northern part of Canada so it¡¯s here in the suburbs. Over half of the year from November to May is too cold and covered with snow. For this reason, we can sometimes see the northern light in my neighborhood in winter. I was surprised and glad when I saw it for the first time at the beginning of this year. I always prepare to see it when I get some information that it comes out on that day.
It¡¯s also near the regional airport and it takes about 15minutes by car. My husband works there. It¡¯s close so he can go to work there easily.
There is some river around here. We used to go on a picnic in summer near the river where it takes 30 minutes by car. It¡¯s very peaceful with nature so we can relax and get healing there.
Overall, we are living in a countryside where we can enjoy nature without too much development.
Of course, there isn¡¯t much to do for us here. However, I want to enjoy here it itself. I think the day will come someday when I miss this place.

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Thank you for this Chloe. Enjoy your weekend!

I¡¯m living in the northern part of Canada so it¡¯s here in the suburbs. 
>>> correct  
>>> OR: I¡¯m living in the northern part of Canada so it¡¯s in the suburbs. 
Over half of the year from November to May is cold and covered with snow. 
>>> correct  
For this reason, we can sometimes see the northern light in my neighborhood in winter. 
>>> correct  
I was surprised and glad when I saw it for the first time at the beginning of this year. 
>>> correct 
I always prepare to see it when I get some information that it comes out on that day.
>>> correct    
It¡¯s also near the regional airport and it takes about 15minutes by car. 
>>> correct   
>>> OR: It¡¯s also near the regional airport and it's about 15minutes away by car. 
My husband works there. 
>>> correct  
It¡¯s close so he goes to work there easily.
>>> correct  
There is some river around here. 
>>> OR: There is a river around here.  
We used to go on a picnic in summer near the river where it takes 30 minutes by car. 
>>> We used to go on a picnic in summer near the river which is 30 minutes away by car.   
It¡¯s very peaceful with nature so we can relax and get healing there.
>>>  correct    
Overall, we are living in a countryside where we can enjoy nature without too much development.
>>>  correct     
Of course, there isn¡¯t much to do for us here. 
>>>  correct    
However, I want to enjoy here it itself. 
>>> However, I want to enjoy it here on its own. 
>>> OR:   However, I want to enjoy it just the way it is. 
I think the day will come someday when I miss this place.
>>>   I think the day will come someday when I will miss this place.

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