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Why I like my school

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I like my school.
That is because my school is often to the athletic and our athletics are very fun.
My second reason is my school sometimes has playtime.
My third reason is our school and my house distance is only 0.5 km.
So, that is because I like my school

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Hi, Joey! Thank you for doing your homework. You have answered the question appropriately. It's nice to know that you like your school.  


- Teacher Debbie


I like my school.
>> This is a good sentence. 


That is because my school is often to the athletic and our athletics are very fun.
>> That is because we often play sports at school, and athletics is very fun.

My second reason is my school sometimes has playtime.
>> This is a good sentence. 

My third reason is our school and my house distance is only 0.5 km.
>> My third reason is it is only 0.5 km from my house.

So, that is because I like my school
>> These are the reasons I like my school.
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