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I don't think the way of students selection in universities and companies is right because the most preferable standard is academic scores. We believe that it is the most objective way to evaluate applicants. However, we have easily seen someone who haven't shown their performance well due to wrong recruitment process. Every person has special abilities that the other people don't have but sadly, specific factors like scores in language tests, licenses and skills are considered as the things people must have. I don't understand why public servants have to take a test of Korea history. It is basic knowledge people need to know so we have learned it while we were at school. It is not the subject employees should know because I don't believe worker at public facilities use their history knowledge to perform their duties. I think that to evaluate specialized knowledge is the most important factor along with socializing abilities because we are humans who always have interaction with some

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Hi there! It's quite a tiring day today! I hope you're having a good one. 
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I don't think the way of students selection in universities and companies is right because the most preferable standard is academic scores. 
>>> CORRECT
We believe that it is the most objective way to evaluate applicants.
>>> CORRECT
 However, we have easily seen someone who haven't shown their performance well due to wrong recruitment process.
>>> CORRECT
 Every person has special abilities that the other people don't have but sadly, specific factors like scores in language tests, licenses and skills are considered as the things people must have.
>>> CORRECT
 I don't understand why public servants have to take a test of Korea history.
>>> CORRECT
 It is basic knowledge people need to know so we have learned it while we were at school.
>>>  It is the basic knowledge people need to know so we have learned it while we were at school.
 It is not the subject employees should know because I don't believe worker at public facilities use their history knowledge to perform their duties.
>>> CORRECT
 I think that to evaluate specialized knowledge is the most important factor along with socializing abilities because we are humans who always have interaction with some people.
>>> CORRECT
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