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Dear Don,

These days I watched drama that subject is Myongbulhurjeon. Main actor is Nam Kil Kim and Main actress is A-joong Kim.
Dr NK is a person from Chosun dynesty time and AJ is current person. when NK is killed, he go to past or future and when he was current time, he met Dr. AJ and he went back the past with her and they made a lot of episode. it was very fun and interesting. please imagine if I go back past and future. you can do a lot of wonderful things.

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Hi Andrew!

Thanks for the composition. See you later ^^

T. DON

Dear Don,

These days I watched drama that subject is Myongbulhurjeon. Main actor is Nam Kil Kim and Main actress is A-joong Kim.
>> These days, I watched a drama and the title is Myongbulhurieon. The main actors are Nam Kil Kim and A-joong Kim.

Dr NK is a person from Chosun dynesty time and AJ is current person. when NK is killed, he go to past or future and when he was current time, he met Dr. AJ and he went back the past with her and they made a lot of episode.
>> Dr NK was a person from Chosun dynesty and AJ is the present person. When NK was killed, he went to the past or future and in that time, he met Dr. AJ and went back to the past with her and they made a lot of episodes.

it was very fun and interesting. please imagine if I go back past and future. you can do a lot of wonderful things.
>> It was very fun and interesting. Imagine if I go back to the past and the future, I can do a lot of wonderful things.
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