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작성자: 류*선
2021-12-15 292

회원님의 영작문

After my English class for two months, I found that my body and spiritual condition are exhausted. I need to recover them. So now I just want to take a rest. I don't regret my English grade and the situation that I have, because I did my best so far. But even though I did my best so far in my circumstance, my English is still poor. I feel don't know how to fill the void. I was expecting that when finished my English class, I will feel free but It was not. I realized that I have to recover my spiritual things. So, I ask God what I want me to do now. I want to act what God wants me to do. That's a way to go more faster and stable than the plan I have. Yesterday when I talked about my whereabouts to Faith, I was cried. She also was cried when I saw my tears. After our meeting, My feeling became very comfortable. Her tears make me was comforted. I always think that tear is a weakness but It's not. Praying of tear is strongest for recovery. I learned that through her tears. Thanks, Faith!!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

God understands your tears, God understands your fears, Jane! These are the lyrics of the song, "God Understands". This too shall pass!-Faith-
After my English class for two months, I found that my body and spiritual condition are exhausted. 
>> After my English class for two months, I feel that my body and spiritual conditions are exhausted. 
I need to recover them. 
>> CORRECT
OR I need to revive my physical and spiritual conditions.
So now I just want to take a rest. 
>> So now, I just want to take a rest. 
I don't regret my English grade and the situation that I have, because I did my best so far. 
>> I don't regret my English grade and the situation that I have because I did my best so far. 
But even though I did my best so far in my circumstance, my English is still poor. 
>> CORRECT
I feel don't know how to fill the void. 
>> I don't know how to fill the void. 
I was expecting that when finished my English class, I will feel free but It was not. 
>> I was expecting that when I finished my English class, I would feel free but It was not. 
I realized that I have to recover my spiritual things. 
>> I realized that I have to restore my spirit.
So, I ask God what I want me to do now. 
>> So, I ask God what He wants me to do now.
I want to act what God wants me to do. 
>> I want to act according to what God wants me to do. 
OR I want to behave according to God's will.
That's a way to go more faster and stable than the plan I have. 
>> That's the way to go faster and more stable than the plan I have. 
Yesterday when I talked about my whereabouts to Faith, I was cried. 
>> Yesterday, when I talked about my whereabouts to Faith, I cried. 
She also was cried when I saw my tears. 
>> She also cried when she saw my tears. 
After our meeting, My feeling became very comfortable. 
>> After our meeting, my feeling became very comfortable. 
Her tears make me was comforted. 
>> Her tears comforted me. 
I always think that tear is a weakness but It's not. 
>> I always think that shedding tears is a weakness but It's not. 
Praying of tear is strongest for recovery. 
>> Praying with tears is the strongest way for recovery. 
I learned that through her tears. 
>> CORRECT
Thanks, Faith!!
>> CORRECT
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