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Korea also was limit all traverling to my country or foreign country because of pandemic.
Now days We difficult traverling to foreign country, If We had been. We have to isolation 14hour after tour.
So a lot of people are going to local trip and above all They are going to Jeju island.
but That is make a big problem. Covid-19 spread in the country due to tourists very fast.
So all the people have to be careful and wear a mask

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Hi Ethan!
I agree with you.
Let's just hope that everything would be better soon.
Thank you for sharing today.^^
~~Teacher Sharon
Korea also was limit all traverling to my country or foreign country because of pandemic.
>> In Korea, there are limitations on travelling within the country or to a foreign country because of the pandemic.
Now days We difficult traverling to foreign country, If We had been. We have to isolation 14hour after tour.
>> Nowadays, it's difficult for us to travel to foreign countries.
If We had been.We have to isolation 14hour after tour.
>> If we go, we would need to be isolated for 14 hours after the tour.
So a lot of people are going to local trip and above all They are going to Jeju island.
>> So a lot of people are going on local trips especially to Jeju island.
but That is make a big problem. 
>> However, this is causing a big problem.
Covid-19 spread in the country due to tourists very fast.
>> Covid-19 spreads really fast in the country because of tourists.
So all the people have to be careful and wear a mask
>> So all the people have to be careful and we should all wear a mask.
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