무료 레벨테스트 받고 강사평가 남기면 1,OOO원 쿠폰 즉시 적립!

혹시 사이트에선 찾지 못한 궁금한 점이 있으세요?
남겨주신 이메일을 통해 답변 드리겠습니다.

문의하신 내용이 문자로 발송되오니
연락처를 남겨주세요.
업무시간 월~금 오전9시~오후6시
(점심시간 낮12시~오후1시)

영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Regrets for my life.

작성자: 박*협
2021-12-15 395

회원님의 영작문

I don't think I have much regrets in my life.
Sometimes one of our co-workers say getting married is the most regrettable thing, and someone regrets not being good to their parents before they die.
I take responsibility for my choice every moment and try to live a satisfied life.
There is one thing that comes to mind now, and when my daughter was about three years old, she fell on her face while playing in bed and hurt her teeth and mouth severely. I was so worried and scared that growing teeth might have been damaged at a young age.
Fortunately, the hospital's doctor said it was okay, but there is still a slight damage her teeth.
I have a regret that I want to go back to that day and prevent the accident.
My mother repeatedly told me to be careful in my childhood, because of that I have never been seriously injured or went to the hospital.
So sometimes i thaught insurance benefits are wasteful.^^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Evan:) 

That sounds awful. I feel bad for your daughter. I hope that this won't happen again. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

-Teacher Elise

I don't think I have much regrets in my life.
>> CORRECT

Sometimes one of our co-workers say getting married is the most regrettable thing, and someone regrets not being good to their parents before they die.
>> There was a time when one of our co-workers said that getting married is the most regrettable thing, and someone regret not being good to their parents before they died. 

I take responsibility for my choice every moment and try to live a satisfied life.
>> I take responsibility for my choices all the time to live a satisfying life. 

There is one thing that comes to mind now, and when my daughter was about three years old, she fell on her face while playing in bed and hurt her teeth and mouth severely. 
>> There is one thing that came to mind now. It is when my daughter was about three years old, she fell on her face while playing on the bed and hurt her teeth and mouth severely. 

I was so worried and scared that growing teeth might have been damaged at a young age.
>> I was so worried and scared that her growing teeth might have been damaged at a young age.

Fortunately, the hospital's doctor said it was okay, but there is still a slight damage her teeth.
>> Fortunately, the hospital's doctor said it was okay, but there is still a slight damage on her teeth.

I have a regret that I want to go back to that day and prevent the accident.
>> I regret that day. I wish I can go back in time to prevent that accident. 

My mother repeatedly told me to be careful in my childhood, because of that I have never been seriously injured or went to the hospital.
>> My mother repeatedly told me to be careful during my childhood and because of that ,I have never been seriously injured or went to the hospital.


So sometimes i thaught insurance benefits are wasteful.^^
>> So sometimes It think that insurance benefits are wasteful. ^^
번호 제목 글쓴이 공개 상태 등록일 조회수
117112 HOMEWORK 박*민 완료 2022-03-07 3
117111 Why I think dancing is good exercise 김*성 완료 2022-03-07 954
117110 Why is English important to you? 김*아 완료 2022-03-07 10
117109 What do you think about abolishing the vaccination pass? Share... 노*주 완료 2022-03-07 4
117108 HOMEWORK 배*호 완료 2022-03-07 1418
117107 If you were planning a party on a very small budget, what would... 황*별 완료 2022-03-07 1149
117106 Essay (Mar 2th, 2022) 남*승 완료 2022-03-07 736
117105 if you could make three wishes, what would they be? 송*윤 완료 2022-03-07 834
117104 Trustworthy 이*경 완료 2022-03-07 1081
117103 What is the least favorite transportation and why? 김*규 완료 2022-03-07 1
117102 Writing Task (Mar 4th, 2022) 남*승 완료 2022-03-07 1055
117101 Why do you think playing a musical instrument is good for you? 주*빈 완료 2022-03-07 488
117100 My Homework 강*우 완료 2022-03-07 586
117099 Do you want to act in a film? Answer in a few sentences. 이*연 완료 2022-03-07 760
117098 Do you prefer summer vacation or winter vacation? 백*진 완료 2022-03-07 983
117097 Myself. 민*정 완료 2022-03-07 3
117096 Do you prefer summer vacations or winter vacations? 박*연 완료 2022-03-07 785
117095 If you can have your own business, what would it be and why? 류*주 완료 2022-03-07 1239
117094 My thoughts on what teenagers can do to contribute to society 김*윤 완료 2022-03-07 831
117093 Monday homework 류*우 완료 2022-03-07 856

HOW TO USE IT?

[마이페이지 > 수업 내용 보기 > 학습 캘린더 > 영작교정 버튼 클릭]

수업 횟수만큼 영작교정 게시판이 생성되며,
지난 날짜에도 게시 할 수 있습니다.

주5회 수업 : 월 20회 이용 가능
주3회 수업 : 월 12회 이용 가능
주2회 수업 : 월 08회 이용 가능
01
교정 내용은 최대 1,000byte까지 올릴 수 있습니다.

첨부 파일은 원활한 첨삭을 위한 참고자료로 사용될 뿐,
파일에 대한 첨삭은 불가능 합니다.

업로드 가능한 첨부 파일은 최대 2mb까지이며,
첨부 할 수 있는 파일 형식은 다음과 같습니다.

문서 - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
이미지 - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
전문 분야를 제외한 회원님이 직접 작성한 글만
첨삭이 가능하며,

올려주신 글의 강사님 첨삭은 24시간 이내에
완료 되는 것을 원칙으로 하고 있습니다.
03
하루 게시 가능한 글은 3회까지 이며,
종료된 수업의 영작교정 게시판은
이용이 어려운 점 양해 부탁 드립니다.
04

와이즈에듀케이션아이(주) 사이트명: 파워잉글리쉬 대표이사 전상현
사업자등록번호: 217-81-44736 통신판매신고번호: 2014-서울도봉-0233호
서울본사: 서울시 노원구 한글비석로 245 두타빌 B동 7층 713호
대표번호 1688-8672 개인정보관리 책임자: 안희영 [powerenglish@pweng.net]