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What do you refuse to learn?

--> I do not want to learn how to play internet games.
In Korea, there are many famous internet games, but I have seen a lot of people who are addictive in playing games, I don't want to be a that kind of person. Therefore, I don't learn to play internet games at all from the begining.

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Hi there, Bo Im!

Learning something that cannot be useful in our lives is a total waste of time. We are only given a few hours everyday and we can do much with so little time developing skills we want and those that can be useful for our lives.

You are an epitome on how one makes good use of time. So, you must agree when people say, "Time is gold.".

Thank you for taking time to write this. See you in a few!

-T. Donna =)

I do not want to learn how to play internet games.
>> Correct!

In Korea, there are many famous internet games, but I have seen a lot of people who are addictive in playing games, I don't want to be a that kind of person. 
>> In Korea, there are many famous internet games, but I have seen a lot of people who are addicted in playing games, I don't want to be a that kind of person. 

Therefore, I don't learn to play internet games at all from the begining.
>> Therefore, I don't learn to play Internet games at all from the beginning.
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