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Why is it necessary to make plans in advance?

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It can save the waste of time and use our limited time more effectively. We always have limited time when we do something so we can tell what to do or not by making plans. It¡¯s also predictable rather than not making plans when something happened suddenly. We can¡¯t know about it if we don¡¯t prepare. Therefore, I always make plans before that. Especially, I tend to prepare for travel in advance. I¡¯ve been somewhere without specific plans in Korea. I just spent my time as time went by. I was regretful after arriving at my home. I couldn¡¯t visit famous spaces and restaurants near my hotel and there was little to be able to do because I didn¡¯t know about it well before. I decided to make plans in advance after that day.

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Thank you for this Miss Chloe!

It can save the waste of time and use our limited time more effectively. 
>>   OR: It can save time and use our limited time more effectively. 
We always have limited time when we do something so we can tell what to do or not by making plans. 
>>  correct
It¡¯s also predictable rather than not making plans when something happened suddenly. 
>> correct 
We can¡¯t know about it if we don¡¯t prepare. 
>> correct 
Therefore, I always make plans before that. 
>>  correct
Especially, I tend to prepare for travel in advance. 
>>  correct
I¡¯ve been somewhere without specific plans in Korea. 
>>  correct
I just spent my time as time went by. 
>>  correct
>>  OR: Time just went by unproductively.
I was regretful after arriving at my home. 
>>  correct
I couldn¡¯t visit famous spaces and restaurants near my hotel and there was little to be able to do because I didn¡¯t know about it well before. 
>> OR: I couldn¡¯t visit famous places and restaurants near my hotel and there was so little time to do something because I didn¡¯t know about it well before.  
I decided to make plans in advance after that day.
>> correct  

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