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Are you good at giving advice? Answer in a few sentences.

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I can give advice to those who want it, but most of the time I sympathize with how people feel and react to their emotions.

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Hello, Judy!

This sentence is correct and it contains a few words but created one long sentence with correct grammar!

Anyway, being sympathetic is needed in places where people already act cold about other's needs and comfort. 

Thanks for answering the homework question!

See you again in  class!

-T. Donna =)

I can give advice to those who want it, but most of the time I sympathize with how people feel and react to their emotions.
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