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영작교정 게시판

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자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Do you wish to go back to your student days? What do you miss about student life?

작성자: 금*진
2021-12-17 262

회원님의 영작문

Of course. I wish to go back to that time if I can do that. I really miss my youth. I also want to change my major and future. I want to use my time more effectively. I thought I have to go to university unconditionally when I was a high school student but it wasn’t very helpful for my future when I think of it now. I want to learn some skills like dental assistant or hairstylist, not just to study so I want to get a professional job. I not only want to study very hard to speak English well but also I will go to Canada earlier and adjust to Canada’s life.
I miss hanging out with my friends as a student. We can’t do that anymore. We have to work hard, raise kids, and do house chores. Even if we meet together again now, we can’t enjoy our time like that time. Our talking subjects are also changed a lot. It’ll be about in-laws’, kid’s education, property and so on. I want to enjoy my youth again. I’m sad that time flies.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Miss Chloe. Enjoy your weekend!

Of course. 
>>>  correct
I wish to go back to that time if I can do that. 
>>>  correct
>>> OR
I wish to go back to that time if it's possible.  
I really miss my youth. 
>>> correct 
I also want to change my major and future. 
>>> correct 
I want to use my time more effectively. 
>>> correct 
I thought I have to go to university unconditionally when I was a high school student but it wasn’t very helpful for my future when I think of it now. 
>>>  I thought I had to go to university unconditionally when I was a high school student but it wasn’t very helpful for my future when I think of it now. 
I want to learn some skills like dental assistant or hairstylist, not just to study so I want to get a professional job. 
>>> correct 
I not only want to study very hard to speak English well but also I will go to Canada earlier and adjust to Canada’s life.
>>> correct 
>>> OR: I not only want to study very hard to speak English well but also I will go to Canada earlier and adjust to the Canadian life.
I miss hanging out with my friends as a student. 
>>> correct 
We can’t do that anymore. 
>>>  correct  
We have to work hard, raise kids, and do house chores. 
>>>  correct  
Even if we meet together again now, we can’t enjoy our time like that time. 
>>>  correct  
Our talking subjects are also changed a lot. 
>>>   correct 
>>> OR: Our conversation topics have changed a lot as well.
It’ll be about in-laws’, kid’s education, property and so on. 
>>>   correct 
I want to enjoy my youth again. 
>>>   correct 
I’m sad that time flies.
>>>   correct 
>>>  OR: I'm sad that time has gone.

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