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Do you wish to go back to your student days? What do you miss about student life?

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Of course. I wish to go back to that time if I can do that. I really miss my youth. I also want to change my major and future. I want to use my time more effectively. I thought I have to go to university unconditionally when I was a high school student but it wasn¡¯t very helpful for my future when I think of it now. I want to learn some skills like dental assistant or hairstylist, not just to study so I want to get a professional job. I not only want to study very hard to speak English well but also I will go to Canada earlier and adjust to Canada¡¯s life.
I miss hanging out with my friends as a student. We can¡¯t do that anymore. We have to work hard, raise kids, and do house chores. Even if we meet together again now, we can¡¯t enjoy our time like that time. Our talking subjects are also changed a lot. It¡¯ll be about in-laws¡¯, kid¡¯s education, property and so on. I want to enjoy my youth again. I¡¯m sad that time flies.

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Thank you for this Miss Chloe. Enjoy your weekend!

Of course. 
>>>  correct
I wish to go back to that time if I can do that. 
>>>  correct
>>> OR
I wish to go back to that time if it's possible.  
I really miss my youth. 
>>> correct 
I also want to change my major and future. 
>>> correct 
I want to use my time more effectively. 
>>> correct 
I thought I have to go to university unconditionally when I was a high school student but it wasn¡¯t very helpful for my future when I think of it now. 
>>>  I thought I had to go to university unconditionally when I was a high school student but it wasn¡¯t very helpful for my future when I think of it now. 
I want to learn some skills like dental assistant or hairstylist, not just to study so I want to get a professional job. 
>>> correct 
I not only want to study very hard to speak English well but also I will go to Canada earlier and adjust to Canada¡¯s life.
>>> correct 
>>> OR: I not only want to study very hard to speak English well but also I will go to Canada earlier and adjust to the Canadian life.
I miss hanging out with my friends as a student. 
>>> correct 
We can¡¯t do that anymore. 
>>>  correct  
We have to work hard, raise kids, and do house chores. 
>>>  correct  
Even if we meet together again now, we can¡¯t enjoy our time like that time. 
>>>  correct  
Our talking subjects are also changed a lot. 
>>>   correct 
>>> OR: Our conversation topics have changed a lot as well.
It¡¯ll be about in-laws¡¯, kid¡¯s education, property and so on. 
>>>   correct 
I want to enjoy my youth again. 
>>>   correct 
I¡¯m sad that time flies.
>>>   correct 
>>>  OR: I'm sad that time has gone.

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