¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Do you keep plants inside your house? Why or why not?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ¹Ú*¿¬
2021-12-17 402

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

My answer is yes because my mom likes to grow the plants. So in my house their are many plants. Their size is different. And plants have to stay worm but outside is too cold at winter.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello Chloe!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


My answer is yes because my mom likes to grow the plants. 

>> My answer is yes because my mom likes to grow plants. 

So in my house their are many plants. 

>> So in my house, there are many plants. 

Their size is different. 

>> Their sizes are different.

And plants have to stay worm but outside is too cold at winter.

>> Plants have to stay warm and it's too cold outside during winter.

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
115963 Thursday homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 1183
115962 Do you think it is best to argue or just walk away? ¹Ú*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 673
115961 Who is the best and worst president of South Korea? ±è*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 0
115960 homework Á¤*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 864
115959 Live with someone ÀÌ*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 1013
115958 Homework (1/26) ÀÌ*Çö ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 1
115957 What¡¯s the most memorable weekend have you had in the past... ¾ç*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 3
115956 Would you describe yourself as a workaholic? ÁÖ*¼® ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 1
115955 What do you know about the history of heath care in your country? ¾ç*ºó ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 0
115954 homework ÀÌ*ºó ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 698
115953 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 2
115952 What exotic food would you like to try? À±*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 1
115951 Is there a difference in friendship between your male friends... ÀÌ*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 2
115950 Do you think dogs should be banned from parks? Why? º¯*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 645
115949 Who is the teacher that inspired you the most when you were... ¹Ú*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 589
115948 Do you still practice Korean celebrations while living in... ¼­*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 1
115947 Why do you think people sell secondhand products these days? ½Å*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 1
115946 What is your thought about a four-day workweek? ¾ö*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 389
115945 Is it okay to have plastic surgery even if you\'re a minor? ½Å*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 1
115944 Do you think pets are good for a person\'s health? ±Ç*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-01-27 0

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04