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Do you keep plants inside your house? Why or why not?

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My answer is yes because my mom likes to grow the plants. So in my house their are many plants. Their size is different. And plants have to stay worm but outside is too cold at winter.

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Hello Chloe!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


My answer is yes because my mom likes to grow the plants. 

>> My answer is yes because my mom likes to grow plants. 

So in my house their are many plants. 

>> So in my house, there are many plants. 

Their size is different. 

>> Their sizes are different.

And plants have to stay worm but outside is too cold at winter.

>> Plants have to stay warm and it's too cold outside during winter.

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