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I usually enjoy watching foreign movies and dramas coming out recently or on Netflix and Korean variety shows with my husband. There are a lot of various dramas and movies on Netflix. We also like watching the Avengers series that was made by Disney. Their series are a lot and various but we almost watched them. We usually listen to English and look at Korean subtitles at the same time when we watch foreign things. We can learn English a little during watching it. On the other hand, when we watch variety shows, all of them are ones from Korea. Because we think I can¡¯t understand foreign humor, especially to me. I also think Korean variety shows are made well than others.
We often enjoy it while having a meal. We can have an interesting time when we watch it together and share their stories. We're going to spend the end of the year by binge-watching what we can¡¯t watch in the meantime together.

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Thank you for this Miss Chloe!

I usually enjoy watching foreign movies and dramas coming out recently or on Netflix and Korean variety shows with my husband. 
>>> correct   
There are a lot of various dramas and movies on Netflix. 
>>> correct  
We also like watching the Avengers series that was made by Disney. 
>>> correct  
Their series are a lot and various but we almost watched them. 
>>> OR:  Their series are a lot and various but we have watched almost  all of them.   
We usually listen to English and look at Korean subtitles at the same time when we watch foreign things. 
>>> correct  
We can learn English a little during watching it. 
>>> OR: We can learn English a little while watching it.   
On the other hand, when we watch variety shows, all of them are ones from Korea. 
>>>  correct 
Because we think I can¡¯t understand foreign humor, especially to me. 
>>> Because we think we can¡¯t understand foreign humor, especially for me.   
I also think Korean variety shows are made well than others.
>>> correct  
We often enjoy it while having a meal. 
>>> correct  
We can have an interesting time when we watch it together and share their stories. 
>>> correct   
We're going to spend the end of the year by binge-watching what we can¡¯t watch in the meantime together.
>>>  correct 



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