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What would you miss the most about Korea?

Even though I will leave Korea because I don't like many things here, but When I go and live abroad, I will miss a lot of things definately.
I love having this four distict season. I've been enjoying different sceneries every season. so I'll miss this very much.
and Eating seasonal Korean food after outdoor activities is so happy moment to me. with loved people.
And there is no need to say I'll miss my parents so much. just thinking about this, I get emotional. I should be faithful to this moment.

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What would you miss the most about Korea?

Even though I will leave Korea because I don't like many things here, but When I go and live abroad, I will miss a lot of things definately.
>> I will leave Korea because I don't like many things here. However, I will definitely miss a lot of things about it when I go and live abroad.

I love having this four distict season.
>> I love having these four distinct seasons.

I've been enjoying different sceneries every season. so I'll miss this very much.
>> I've been enjoying different sceneries every season. so I'll miss this very much.

and Eating seasonal Korean food after outdoor activities is so happy moment to me. with loved people.
>> In addition, eating seasonal Korean food with my loved ones after doing outdoor activities is delightful. 

And there is no need to say I'll miss my parents so much. just thinking about this, I get emotional. 
>> Most importantly, I'll miss my parents so much. Thinking about leaving them makes me emotional.

I should be faithful to this moment.
>> What do you mean by this? 
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