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What was the most fun childhood memory you had?

-->When I was young, all the villagers were close and had a good relationship.
So when I ran outside, there were always friends who I could play with.
I have a good memory of playing with until late at night with them.
These days, it is very rare for children to go out and play. I can feel that generations have changed a lot.

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Hello there, Bo Im!

Having the time to play and enjoy time with friends is a luxury that children get nowadays especially there in your country. Aside from the fact that the number of children are dwindling in Korea, most of them study so hard they miss the chance to have fun with their friends. Hence, childhood before had more play than at present.

These are fond memories we can only replay in our minds. So, always treasure them.

Thank you for this very good answer. I shall see you again in class tomorrow.

-T. Donna =)

When I was young, all the villagers were close and had a good relationship.
>> Correct!

So when I ran outside, there were always friends who I could play with.
>> Correct!

I have a good memory of playing with until late at night with them.
>> I had a good memory of playing with them until late at night.

These days, it is very rare for children to go out and play.
>> Correct!

 I can feel that generations have changed a lot.
>> Correct!
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