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I think just focus at made a medical advances.
Of course, it won't spread if people don't gather, we can't do it.
Because we have a life of a human and rhythm.
The only way is to get a perfect vaccine.
But it's very hard I already know about that.

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Hi Ann:) 

It saddens me to hear that the number of COVID-19 patients in South Korea is continuously increasing. We also experienced the same thing. Hopefully, the government will think of an effective way to control the outbreak. Your suggestions are actually great. 

I heard from one of my students that being a trainee is very hard. There are so much standards you have to meet. I feel bad for you but that's okay. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

-Teacher Elise
I think just focus at made a medical advances.
>> I think they should just focus on medical advances. 

Of course, it won't spread if people don't gather, we can't do it.
>> Of course, it won't spread if people don't gather but we can't do it.

Because we have a life of a human and rhythm.
>> It is because we are humans. 

The only way is to get a perfect vaccine.
>> CORRECT

But it's very hard I already know about that.
>>Although it is very hard and I know about that. 
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